Ace Sith (complete)

Basic Information

Name:
Light "Ace" Sith

Age:
Characters appears 23 and Actual age 223

Gender:
Male

Division:
2 divisions

Seat:
Lietuteant

Looks:

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Light is a long haired man. Who hair is long and spiky, it consists of the colors black and gray. Light loves wearing his sleeveless shirt that is all black and fits very tightly. He can also be caught wearing a long sleeves white shirt that fit him well but is baggy around the arm area. When on missions he always wears his all white jacket, that has his Family symbol on it. The symbol is a sound sign in the middle of a yang and yen symbol. It’s all black and white with the sound symbol in red. He wears his armband on his right arm. He never moves it because it covers a weird scare on his right arm. He likes to wear his all black shorts that stop 5inches above his ankles. He usually wears his long black pants in the time of winter or when it’s raining out side. He own two types of boots his all black mission boats and his black and brown training boots. He wears an all black rag around his waist. His eyes are the color of rain but are sometimes mistaken for the color of gray.


Personality:
Ace has a too himself personality. He likes to keep his distances from other because he doesn’t like the idea of being attached to other people. He’s very quite but he’s not shy. Ace is actually a very cocky because, he’s never lost a fight to anyone on his level or anyone consider being below his level. He never speaks unless he feels it will benefit him in some kind of way. He hates work but loves to go on missions; you can almost say he likes to keep himself busy. He despises everyone including his family, but he never let’s anyone know how he truly feels. Because he fears people will stop trusting him and he’ll be stopped from going on missions. Ace is a trust worthy person but you can always tell that he is not always there in his mind or that he has his own hidden agenda when on missions. He carries a cool head in all situations, which can be relaxing but hard to understand. He’s a difficult person to understand but his strategy techniques on the battle field is some of the best, that’s why his family nicked name him mastermind. Now don't take him the wrong way because if he ever feel threaten he will cut you down without a seconds thought of it. Ace had an overall loyalty to his Captains, and he would choose death in a heartbeat if it meant the Society would live longer than him. Ace also has a strong desire to protect what is left of his family. While he may not be good with making friends, once how does they’re considered family in his eyes. Light has his own personal saying that he lives by at believe to be true thru out his whole life. “The man that lives by the sword will die by the sword and be buried on the battle field with honor. The man that lives by the pen and unwilling to bear witness to the sword’s power, will never be honorable enough to be buried by the sword. But the man that Lives by the pen and will defend what he believes in with a sword will be buried in the hall of kings and heroes.”

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name:
Kaling the Ice Dragon

Zanpakuto Looks:

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Zanpakuto Description:
Depending on which side the blade is on it has the ability to break bones and burse the opponent or cut thru the opponent’s body. It heightens the good side of Ace. The Kaling works better when near lots
of water, wind, and in the light of the moon. When near these thing each swing of the sword is backed by a strong blue wave of light that is ice cold to the touch. But on the flip side when Kaling is under the dark influences of Oyslesia a fire dragon that can converts ice waves into heat waves. The spirit energy from the blade that attacks come out in burst of red spiritual energy that jumps off the blade with each strike.

Released Zanpakuto Description:
Once the Zanpakuto has been released into its true form, Kaling becomes a bow and arrow that fuses with Ace's spiritual pressure and release stronger waves of attacks. The arrow is a total of 1 meter long and the bow is 2 meters long, 2 inches thick and made from wooden metal material. The length of the arrows adds to the range and accuracy of the shot. By provoking the spiritual energy the arrow can burst into flames when released. This is Light secondary form of attack. The arrows come 20 at a time and are made of pure spiritual power, which hardens into an arrow like shape, which can be thought as a Quincy like ability. If Kaling maintains its sword form its' wind strikes of blue light and dark strikes of red flames become more powerful and deadly.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase:
"Kaling Sing for the heavens" or "Kaling dance from hell"

Released Zanpakuto Looks:
(What your Zanpakuto looks like once released

Zanpakuto Spirit:
Oyslesia is a fire dragon that was trapped in the sword but the empire of the light realm.while he has the ability to teach ace several techniques with the Zanpakuto he prefers not to as he believes that it would be a waste of his time and power. But ever blue moon Oyslesia decides to interfere in some of Ace's fights by provoking his power in red waves. Although Oyslesia refuses to help ace in mastering the sword they do carry out lots of conversations and quiet friend to each other. Ace refers to Oyslesia as sky most of the time, and rarely calls him for help in fights.

Zanpakuto Realm:
the realm of light is a place of beauty a peace. Its main sources of power are wind, Light, and water. It is against most ideals of war but produces some of the most powerful weapons know to mankind in the categories of the areas.


Bankai Information

Bankai Description:
While using Bankai Ace gain an armor around his body that protects him from all blinding kidos up to Level 50. He grows 30% faster making him one of the fastest members of the Soul Society. His strength grow 30% stronger and Accuracy is almost 50% better than when the starts a fight. His sword transform into sword is two times bigger. It can also but transformed into a bow and arrow can shoot 3 arrows at a time, when he is using bankai Ace gains a special technique that can released his arrows into a thousand shoot strike but He can only use this attack twice before he losses bankai for a total of six post. Ace is able to hold Bankai for 5 -10 post depending on how calm he is at the time of releasing his bankai.

This is only a small gimps of his bankai's power, it true from is Silent Night Tundra. Upon sticking his Zanpakuto into the ground everything within a 1 mile radius becomes frozen solid and it begins to snow. A thick white cloud that creates a slight camouflage to untrained eyes. Light than gains a second blade made of complete ice, But after 10 strike the sword breaks, but another can be made with in seconds from the extra snow that is around him. The ice sword can be made to be sized at a variety of styles and lengths. But his ultimate technique is the ice box and multi-sword press. This technique is accomplished but trapping your victim in the snow that they are standing in, the snow acts as quick sand and hold them in one place. Than he places his ice sword into the ground and allows it to be dissolved by snow and reestablish is self as an icebox around your opponent that freezes solid. Once the box is formed,Light than can reestablish sword, and stab it thru the box. Every time an ice sword enters the box another can be reformed used at will.

Bankai Looks:

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Alterations:
Ace gains a arrow bag on his back that allow him too care a total of 40 arrows at a time

History and RP Sample

History:

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RP Sample:

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Lets get one thing straight here, I''m the CC.

And with your skill, I don't even think you could make it as the CC. Or a Vice for that matter.

well i did know that you were and you've never seem me rp before so how would you know anything about my skill???

Well, you wouldn't know that either. I was on the last site, so don't assume. But I can clearly tell by your lack of grammatical skills, and your rp sample.

I admit that was one of my best samples, i had did a much better the first time thru but it wouldn't save because it was to long so i removed it and picked a old one i did like three years ago, so trust me what you've read is not even close to anything i can do in my current stage.

I've seen enough. You do not have the ability to give me one that you like. This shows me that you are either lazy or you do not care. These things are not good in people, and I do not like it. Trust me, I've seen enough.

"I had did a much better one"

that right there along proves u are not captain level.

So, I suggest you fix the grammatical problems in this application and change your rank to at least third level. Then we will look over the real thing. Use spell checker please

Better Rp Sample



It was amazing how quickly word had spread among the society of Light’s true nature. Light was now looked upon as a killing machine, not as a captain or a teacher but as a monster. Light knew of the history between the Vaizards and the Reapers but never thought he would be out-casted by his own brother like he was. Now feelings betrayed by his own flesh and blood Light has sworn to exact his revenge against the pone known as his brother and make his move to tear down all that had belonged to him. 13 divisions made him strong but the killing machine inside him made him stronger. As far as he was concerned Ken had to die. His brother had betrayed his own family because of what people would link. He lied about his age to gain more power. He was a thief among thieves and as the old saying, goes there’s no honor among thieves. Light was now ready to give up his old name as Light and would become his brother’s keeper, Sith. Sith slowly made his way out of his office and started down towards the entrance of his main building. He slowly gripped his sword tightly as he prepared to meet face to face with Ken, or more formally known as Ace. This meeting was going to be the meeting that topped all in the past. No more talking about the good of our people or our kinds, but action of the destruction of those who were not like them. Sith slowly patted the shoulders of each one of his ex-squad soldiers as he made his way out. He couldn’t help but feel a slight hesitation for what was about to go down, ken had always had the spoon and his mouth and skill came naturally for him. And Sith knew he had to work for everything he wanted, but knew that some time pure skill of knowing how sometimes beat hard work. Last time he and Ken had meet, Ken had spared his life by allowing him to run, but this time it wasn’t going to be anything like that. This was going to be the final show down. Sith slowly began walking thru the gate path that lead to earth. Upon reaching his final destination; he gulped hard as he looked down the alley that held a figure that looked a lot like him. At first he thought it was just nerves getting him all worked, but upon a second look he knew it was him. He slowly braced his hands forward as he began walking down the alley way. It took him only a few seconds for him to be face to face with Ken, but moment wanted to drag forever and make the most of these begging desires for bloodshed that was now here. It was funny how that even thought Sith was the older brother he looked so much weaker and smaller than his baby brother. So much of him hated the fact that Ken was the chosen child, and another part loved the fact that he had the Right to Say he was the favor son of his father. No matter how hard he wanted to hold the better feeling back from his face he couldn’t help but smile and joke as he looked upon Ken’s face.


“So Ken...”Sith began laughing, “My bad little Bro…I mean Captain Ace.” Sith quickly pulls his hand up in a taunting salute to his brother. “How have you been since you declared war against me?” Unwilling to wait for answer he quickly kept talking not leaving Ace any room to make a statement. “So what is it now? Your three thousandth and one birthday or better yet your hundredth twenty-seventh, I don’t remember sometimes I forget.” Sith continued on with his taunting. Finally all together Sith had nothing to say but his face said it all, how dare you sell me out for some moment in glory, what gave you the right to treat me like some calm thug, some house hold rat, some unworthy beast that crawls on his belly. Sith began edging his hand along the side of the hilt of his sword as his teeth bite down harder on each other and his eyes became more focus. Slowly Sith could feel them flickering between normal and gold as his hate began to rise. Every second Sith had eyes on Ace his anger seemed to boil even hotter than before. Without a second notices he unshielded his sword and swings it at Ace’s face causing the blade to zip right by his head. As the sword slide by you could see the wind off the tip of the blade slowly flip Ace hair back slightly as if it was being blown by a small breeze. Unimpressed by what seemed to be Ace’s determiner of complete laid back attitude of being careless in this matter made the want to fight unbearable as Sith placed his sword back in to its sheet. Again Sith let’s out a roar as he makes the trees shake and the nearby birds and other creators flee in terror. A small part of him wanted to huge his brother by another part of him wanted to make Ace learn how it felt to be stepped on by someone you care about. Slowly the light cracks open the clouds and reveals the two in the alley all alone with no one to see or hear them but there brother. It was weird all this time Sith just wanted to build his bond with his brother who he had lost so long ago, but his brother wanted nothing to do with him because of what he was, what he had became. If blood was thicker than water, why did it flow just like water? It was clear since the dawn of his birth they were groomed for this, they were the keys to a car that everyone had been driving to this point and there was nothing either one of them could do about it. Ace was the poster boy child for good, and well Sith been came the face of evil and both had to defend what they believed in at all cost even if it meant the life of the own brother.

Sith slowly draws his blade as the wind picks up and kicks the dust into the sky. Finally he says, “Blood s thicker than water, but when you cut the flesh your blood will flow just like water.” As he gripped the blade tighter He lowered his stance and prepared for combat.

Ace wrote:

Your three thousand and one birthday or better yet your hundredth
twenty-seventh, I don’t remember sometimes I forget

Sith let’s out a roar as he made the trees shake and the nearby birds and other
creators flee in terror.

A small part of
him wants to huge his brother by another part of him wanted to make Ace learn
how it felt to be stepped on by someone you care about.

Slowly the light cracks
open the clouds and reveals the two in the alley all alone with no one to see
or hear them but there brother.

Finally he say

These happen to be a few things I've found that is horribly wrong with your rp sample. You are not becoming a captain, I can tell you that much.

This is your so called better rp sample? It may be longer, but you need to learn how to write, as well.

Also, the way you posted this, I hated reading this, because of the way you set it up. Don't press enter so much.

I didn't press enter a lot it just how it copied over from the word document and besides i have'nt did my final editing im still working on it between class and work, which is why it reads wip at the top.

Bottom line: You aren't getting a Captain spot. You can't even spell haven't right!

Question, is this a regular rp and was done just like any other or is this pre-made after an extended period of time?

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