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Mizaki Lieutenant
Posts : 7 Your standing. : 0 Join date : 2010-08-13 Age : 32 Location : Nova Scotia, Canada
| Subject: Division 5, Lieutenant: Mizaki Koori {complete} Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:22 am | |
| Basic InformationName: Mizaki Koori Age: Appears: 19 Actual: 240 Gender: Male Division: Division 5 Seat: Vice Captain Looks: - Spoiler:
Personality: Mizaki doesn't like pushovers, or vegetables. He prefers people who don't push others around for the hell of it. Mizaki loves dark quiet places, he also likes to be last to leave a room, so he doesn't get to paranoid about the people behind him. Mizaki is paranoid that people would do anything to harm him. Mizaki believes that everything is black and white. Your either a enemy, or a friend. If you betray him, or even say something he doesn't like, he will count you as a enemy and put you on a death list. Mizzaki is also known to put work on hold for other things, like girls. He also tends to be quite silent, maybe even depressing. He can also be known to be perverted more then most. Mizaki doesn't like traitors or rats. He believes that they betray the shinigami code. Mizaki is always nice to women, he was raised to respect women and treat them like equals. Mizaki doesn't like guys who think they are tough for picking on girls, so he tends to stick up for them. Stats(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options) Strength: 50 Speed: 40 Accuracy: 40 Stamina: 60 Zanpakuto InformationZanpakuto Name: Kousetsu Zanpakuto Looks: - Spoiler:
Zanpakuto Description: One frozen 5ft spike is launched at 35mph at the enemy target. (this can only be done when released) Released Zanpakuto Description: From the release point til about 50 yards out, the ground freezes over. The air becomes extremely cold and anyone in the frozen radius finds it it hard to breath. If the persons stay in the frozen area too long, their limbs start to slow down, and the swords become heavier. A minor case of frost bite will ensue. All trees and shrubs in the surrounding are covered by a light layer of ice over them. Each post, 2 stamina points are being reduced from Mizaki, since its draining his strength. 2 points, per post. Zanpakuto Release Phrase: "Hisame no Kousetsu" Released Zanpakuto Looks: - Spoiler:
Zanpakuto Spirit: - Spoiler:
Zanpakuto Realm: - Spoiler:
History and RP SampleHistory: - Spoiler:
~Arc 1: Birth to Adulthood to Death~
Mizaki Koori’s father was a samurai, and his mother was a servant girl. His fathers side of the family looked down on him for being a bastard child, and a child from a servant. During child birth, his mother had complications and died from blood lost. Mizaki was being raised by his father, who had his own land and served nobody but himself.
Mizaki had a difficult childhood, being raised to become a samurai and being looked down upon by his family. Except his father, who loved him so. He started training when he was 4, and continued onwards from there. When he was born, it was the time of the Edo Period in Japan’s history. This time lasted till he was 8, when it was overthrown by the Meiji Restoration.
When he was 6, his father, a samurai, was given a choice. To either become a peasant, or to serve their feudal lord as a paid retainer. His father and the feudal lord didn’t quite see eye to eye, and had arguments over many things. So his father decided to give up his sword and become a peasant.
Mizaki and his father moved, away from the cities. They lived in the woods, and lived off of his fathers savings. When Mizaki was 16 his father contracted a disease. Mizaki went to the city to get some medicine for his father, but since he was a “peasant”, many people turned their noses up and ignored him.
Nobody wanted to help Mizaki, so he decided to go to the feudal lord for help. But this wasn’t such a great idea, for he was the son of the man who insulted the feudal lord. So, Mizaki was imprisoned and was going to be sentenced to execution.
Mizaki didn’t know what to do, it was only a matter of time before he would die. Mizaki looked at his cell door all the time, hoping he wouldn’t die, and be set free. For months he was sitting in a damp cell. The days creeping closer to his 17th birthday, and he kept wondering how his father was doing.
It wasn’t long, maybe a few weeks before his birthday. The feudal lord paid a visit to Mizaki. The feudal lord gave him a choice. Either: become his samurai, or to be executed. Mizaki didn’t want to die, so he became the new feudal lord’s samurai. He trained day and night, so he wouldn’t get rusty from those 10-11 years of not training.
Mizaki went home to visit his father, and when he did, he discovered his father had passed away. Mizaki was distraught over the news of his fathers passing, but he had to return quickly home, to the feudal lord. Mizaki was whipped, for not asking permission to go visit his father. It was hard times working under this man, who hated Mizaki.
But Mizaki endured it, and continued doing what he did best. It wasn’t long before a small group of rebels tried to assassinate the current feudal lord, but they couldn’t kill Mizaki, who protected him with all he had. That was when he was 18.
When Mizaki was 19, those same rebels, hired a ninja to take care of Mizaki once and for all. The time of Mizaki’s death was late at night, and he was walking from a shrine. It was a cold winter night, and Mizaki was drinking alcohol that night, so he wasn’t at his peek condition. Since it was the day he discovered his fathers body.
The ninja crept behind Mizaki, and stabbed him with a poison kunai, right in the spin. Mizaki cried in pain and fell to the ground. If he lived from the stab, the poison would kill him, if he lived from the poison. He wouldn’t be able to stand. The ninja made Mizaki, a cripple.
But Mizaki didn’t die from blood loss, or live as a cripple. He died from the poison. The poison quickly spread through his body, destroying it. Mizaki slowly closed his eyes, to never awake as a human again.
~ Arc 2: Soul Reaper~
Mizaki awoke, outside of the shrine, he looked around and couldn’t believe he lived. He walked back to the feudal lords home and walked in the door, at the same time someone was. Mizaki walked around the place, looking at other people.
Mizaki walked into the main room, looked at everyone and noticed some of the women crying. He wondered if someone had passed away, so he walked towards the feudal lord to ask what happened.
Mizaki spoke a few words, politely. But he got no response. Mizaki was getting concerned. Nobody was talking to him, or even looking at him. Mizaki looked around at the people, crying, being sullen. Then, the rebels appeared. They killed off the guards and went straight to the feudal lord. He was killed instantly.
After that, a man wearing all black, with his blade drawn. Hit Mizaki on his forehead. Mizaki fell backwards, turning into a black butterfly, and flew away towards a different dimension. Mizaki appeared in a street. Seeing thousands of people walking by.
Mizaki didn’t know where he was, or what he was doing there. But he couldn’t help but feel..empty. So Mizaki walked around for hours, looking for the man in black. He came across a giant wall. Probably very high for his standards. Mizaki walked along the wall, and found a giant man standing at the gate.
He asked what Mizaki wanted, and Mizaki gave him an answer. The man looked at him confused, and a man dressed in black, walked by him, grabbed Mizaki by the arm, and brought him inside. The man, put Mizaki in a room with other men in black. “New Student.” the man said, and so it was.
Mizaki was forced to become a new shinigami. Which, he was training to do. Mizaki did what he was told, how to do it, and when to do it. Mizaki was very good at wielding his Zanpaktou. Mizaki was great at many things, but Kido. He was horrible at Kido. The teacher told Mizaki he had a great amount of spiritual pressure, but didn’t know how to use it well.
Mizaki didn’t know what he meant, but trained hard at it. Mizaki finally mastered kido, and graduated from the school. Mizaki, was appointed to division 5, and he quickly went up in the ranks. Mizaki didn’t really know what to do, since,he was 3rd seat. The Vice-Captain offered Mizaki if he needed some help, Mizaki took it.
Mizaki gradually learned what to do, and how to do it. But what else was wrong, was that Mizaki wasn’t strong enough to fight a Arrancar by himself. Which, cost the Vice-Captain of division 5, to lose his life. Mizaki was distraught about it, but kept it cool and continued to train hard.
Until one day, Mizaki was appointed to be Vice-Captain. This came as a great shock to him, but he happily took the position and became the new Vice-Captain. He continued to train and become a better Vice-Captain. RP Sample: - Spoiler:
"Lightning Style: Electrico Cornata!!" Screamed Kaosu, while lightning struck his horns on his head. He then charges at the missing ninja and the electricity runs through its body, frying it to ashes. "Well..,that was unexpected..." said Kaosu, scratching the back of his head, while letting out a big sigh.
Kaosu walked past the burning corpse and sat on a tree that had fallen over due to his jutsu. Kaosu was bored out of his mind, he didn't want to fight, he had no choice in the matter. He instead made sure that he ended it quickly and quietly. He took out a piece of candy that he had somewhere and started to eat it.
Kaosu looked at Shishi, who had just walked out of a building that he went into, just before that missing ninja arrived. "What took you so long?!" screamed Kaosu, with a furious expression. "They were taking forever..,idiot..." explained Shishi, smacking Kaosu on the back of his head. "Let's get out of here, we have other things to do." said Shishi, walking towards the south of the buildings entrance. "W-wait for me!!" said Kaosu, being scared since he didn't know the area very well.
Shishi and Kaosu are good friends, they've known each other for a few years. Kaosu looked up to Shishi, but wouldn't tell him so. Sometimes, in Kaosu's eyes, Shishi was cool, and awesome even. But other times, Shishi was a jerk, that's when they fought..,over everything.
They walked for a good few miles, which made Kaosu bored, and angry. "Dammit man! When, and where, are we going!?" screamed Kaosu, basically throwing a tantrum. Shishi turned around, smacked Kaosu, then started walking again. "We're going home, so stop complaining." said Shishi, acting all calm. Kaosu rubbed the back of his head, where he got smacked, twice. "Okay..." said Kaosu, in a low voice.
Kaosu walked a few steps behind Shishi, he didn't want to make him made again. So he just kept his mouth shut and continue to walk quietly. Shishi, was apparently enjoying the silence, but Kaosu wasn't. They've been walking a few miles since Kaosu made his last outburst. So he was still a bit antsy about where they were headed. Shishi said home, but that was probably code for something. I wonder where were headed...I hope somewhere's fun! thought Kaosu, doing some weird hand motion. Shishi noticed it, and he hit Kaosu again. "Don't act like a idiot, or I'll summon a rhino on you." threatened Shishi, continue walking along the path. Kaosu rubbed where Shishi hit him. "Yes sir..." mumbled Kaosu, not wanting to get hit by a rhino.
Shishi was walking up a set of stairs. "Were almost home, so be happy." said Shishi, not even looking behind him. Kaosu was still a few steps behind him. "Yes sir..." mumbled Kaosu again. This time, Shishi really did get him home. Kaosu laughed, he didn't think he would get home in one piece. "Thanks man, at least you know your way around this place!" said Kaosu with a giant grin. "Now let's grab some grub! on you!" said Kaosu, running down the hill. Shishi sighed, not wanting to hit him again, since it was getting too bothersome.
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| | | Wade Advanced Human
Posts : 71 Your standing. : 0 Join date : 2010-03-04 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Division 5, Lieutenant: Mizaki Koori {complete} Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:20 pm | |
| Add more personality to your character. I know you can do better than two lines. I suggest adding a stamina decrease per post, because that is just what kind of Shikai you have. Remove Bankai, because you are applying for Vice captain.
Add more to your history, one paragraph will not cut it. Put it in arcs, such as Human Arc and Shinigami Arc. | |
| | | Mizaki Lieutenant
Posts : 7 Your standing. : 0 Join date : 2010-08-13 Age : 32 Location : Nova Scotia, Canada
| Subject: Re: Division 5, Lieutenant: Mizaki Koori {complete} Sat Aug 21, 2010 2:05 pm | |
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| | | Wade Advanced Human
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| Subject: Re: Division 5, Lieutenant: Mizaki Koori {complete} Sat Aug 21, 2010 2:11 pm | |
| I'm not sure, but you should look at approved apps, and follow their example. | |
| | | Mizaki Lieutenant
Posts : 7 Your standing. : 0 Join date : 2010-08-13 Age : 32 Location : Nova Scotia, Canada
| Subject: Re: Division 5, Lieutenant: Mizaki Koori {complete} Sat Aug 21, 2010 4:26 pm | |
| mmk, I did it o.o 13 paragraphs according to my comp
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| | | Wade Advanced Human
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| Subject: Re: Division 5, Lieutenant: Mizaki Koori {complete} Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:00 pm | |
| I don't see a problem here.
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